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Win! A success story, less 10K

Woohoo! I’ve hit the 50K mark (and change) for November writing, thus winning my sixth NaNoWriMo challenge. I actually won the thing while watching the Thanksgiving parade on mute. That was surreal, as it turns out. Huge balloons and dance routines with no sound? Just a bit Ood.

The book is not quite finished. I’m about halfway through the pivotal end scene. Horror and death will soon ensue. I’m looking forward to diving into it today, actually. Horror and death are fun to write. I often wonder what is wrong with me, then I shrug and get back to the killin’ (but only on paper. Yeah. Only paper.)

This was the fastest I’ve ever crossed the NaNo finish line. Looking back, I can think of a few reasons I flew through this novel with six days to spare. (Six days! Luxury.)

1. A writing habit. I had been writing daily, as you, invisible imaginary reader, know. I had been writing/editing nearly every day, possibly with weekends off, for at least a month or two before NaNo began. NaNo doesn’t really allow for days off, but all I had to do was add a couple days a week rather than shift from zero to seven.

2. The story. I had a story well underway by November. I’d written 15K, but more importantly, I’d done nearly all the world building and character research I needed to do already. I had an outline. The outline still had the “and them some stuff happens” 25-35K section, but I had a far better idea where I was going than I have in previous years. I even had something of an endgame in mind, though the endgame got pushed up to the end of the middle game and a different endgame was born. Kinda. This is how it goes, though, as you draft. Middle game. It’s a thing. I also had a real vision for the pacing and theme of the story, so I could always return to those things when stuck.

3. The midnight dash bump. No really. Two sets of word count in one day really do set me off right. I was double where I was supposed to be by the end of day one. It helps.

4. 2K per day. I aimed for that instead of the usual 1667. I read on Twitter that someone was aiming for that, in 500 word chunks. 4 500 word sessions is way less daunting than one 2K session. There were many days I hit 1500, then thought that 500 was so easy, might as well do that also. Worked really, really well.

5. Write ins. I didn’t make very many, due to certain spouses having the nerve to need to work late or something. Gah, don’t spouses know that writing maniacally with a bunch of other writers is more important than income?! Sheesh. However the ones I did get to helped me double my word count for the day.

6. I’ll confess to a small amount of racing with one of my NaNo buddies. I won, too, by about 12 hours. MWAHAHA.

7. Tea. Lots of tea. I can’t really eat as much pie as I would like these days, so went to the mall and treated myself to some tasty fancy teas. Then consumed them in mass quantities (quantiTEAS. See what I did thar?). Treating yourself is always a good thing, no matter how you do it.

8. Constant creative mindset. Even when I wasn’t writing, I kept the RadioMuse channel tuned. I heard a lot of static, but I kept listening. Occasionally something came through, and was beautiful. I was angsting about a certain plot point on Twitter, and the second I posted about it, the idea came to me. Keeping the creative juices flowing throughout the day really helped the story gain traction.

Don’t get me wrong, there were difficult sections. I’m convinced that 20-35K is the swamp of sorrows for first drafts. It’s like, the more you struggle, the faster you sink to your death. I don’t know why, but I’ve encountered the phenomenon enough times to know it isn’t unusual, at least for me. I’ve learned to take that section one word at a time, just keep slogging through, and eventually the magic will occur and there will be a path out.

I hope everyone is having a great end run toward 50K about now, or already validated and coasting on the high. Either way, see you on the flip side, NaNoEdMo. *shudder*

Guest Post

In between manic writing sessions, I did a guest spot on WrimosFTW. The blog is great, full of support and pep from newbie NaNo authors and practiced veterans. They have contests and other goodies, too.

Check it out! But if all your writing time is sucked up reading the great articles, don’t blame me :)

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What makes a novel?

What I feel like I struggle with is… the magic spark. The way to take an account, a listing of events, and morph them into a novel.

When I settle in and read a really *good* novel, it takes me somewhere else. I disappear into the vast desert beyond Tull with Roland, I memorize the name of God with Phedre. I’m right with Pendergast and his bottomless jacket pockets as he tracks a creature in a museum. I don’t feel like I’m an observer in these tales, but that I’m right inside them. That’s the difference between an account and a novel.

The magic spark, the sprinkle of glitter (or grave dirt), is the thing I always seem to be seeking now. I want to evoke. I want to pull a sense of fear or excitement or just plain curiosity from a reader. But how?

I don’t want to be a copy artist, stealing from better authors to inform my own work. I want to find my own way to it. It is still pretty foggy out here in storyland.

I’m here though. Caroline’s world keeps getting worse, as intended. Word by word, we’ll get there.

Pain

I had dental surgery last week. I am not a happy camper, nor is my face. Throbbing is a sign of affection, right? Or was that infection…

I count myself lucky though, because experiencing pain gives me a chance to sympathize with my characters as I prepare for NaNoWriMo.

See, I want them to suffer. Their lives should hurt, they will bleed. Caroline (remember her?) is going to lose everything she holds dear and her entire life will turn sideways before she regains her sense of self. If she regains it at all. This novel is a lot about hurt, a lot about pain and fear and anguish and suffering.

Yes, my mouth hurts that much. Shut up.

In unrelated news, I’m trying to sit on a large exercise ball instead of a chair to help my back.* So far, I’ve found that I bounce around a lot but it I can’t get close enough to the table to make it work. Plus I think it is losing air and I’m getting lower and lower every day. I’m not impressed, but I do look ridiculous. That’s something, right?

*Kids, when you turn 30, your body begins to die in pieces. Teeth, back, knees. Might as well just accept your inevitable mortality, because there’s no avoiding it. Sigh.

 

The good news

Because I’ve been boobs-deep in edits of Waking Kiara, my first draft of Worse Things has moved to the back burner. Which means, I have a project for NaNoWriMo! Even more exciting, I actually have a project I can finish. I’ve got the first 15K done, so add another 50K and I get a very close to completed tale.

Finishing a first draft during NaNo–I could weep with joy. Plus a lot of the preliminary work is done on world building and plotting, so no pantsing for me. Wooohooooo!

We shall not discuss the fact that this book still contains a fairly murky “and then some stuff happens” middle section. No, we shall not.

Edits! We have edits! We have lots and lots of… yeah.

I tell you, it is good to review the basics now and then. I have learned so much about writing, it all starts to conflict in my head.

The workshop just started and while I’m not quite under an NDA, I’m not going to detail it word for word here. I will say that going over the very basics of grammar, punctuation, spelling and common errors at first seemed a bit tedious. However now that I’ve run through some of the exercises, I’m glad I’m doing it. These are great tricks to catch mistakes that can improve the polish of my writing and can help me do that without help from a crit partner (although I love crit partnering).

Often, a grammar error is nestled inside a paragraph or sentence I haven’t paid much attention to. I can fix the grammar and the style all in one go. Nifty.

Slightly related: my cats really like to lay on my analog novel board. This makes it very difficult for me to use it. I’ve got cards to move around! I went to take a picture of the ungrateful jerkcat and he shot laser eyes at me. Maybe I’ll just leave him alone…

Cat on a hot tin novel board

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Hitting Send

In my eternal quest to get Waking Kiara into some kind of shape other than “tepid mess,” I’ve signed up for a self-editing workshop. I’m pretty excited to see what they have to teach me, especially since the creator of the workshop is an editor at Carina Press, one of the places I’m thinking of sending the coyote shifters.

If you’re interested, I think there’s a few slots left, but the workshop starts Wednesday so get your rear in gear.

In life news, I am covered in bug bites, but I saw Train and Matt Nathanson on the lawn last night. GREAT CONCERT! There is no doubt that the pair of bands sang mostly what you might call “lurve songs,” but I have a special place in my heart for both bands.

Plus–if my hero could sing to my heroine in Waking Kiara, he might sing this:

Marry Me, Train

(He’s head over heels for her while she’s still sort of worried he’s a bad guy. Sad.)

Wish me luck in editville, I think I’m going to need it.

 

Invisible People

I thought this article at the Publisher’s Weekly blog was pretty interesting, and more than a little scary. Not surprising though.

Worse Things, the first draft I’m working on now, features a young lesbian main character. There’s no preaching or issues in the novel, she’s simply who she is. One of the overarching themes I hope to address in the novel is how parents and children connect when they’re very different people. Caroline’s sexuality is simply a part of that difference, one that keeps her isolated from her father.

The truth is, when I started daydreaming this novel to life, Caroline was gay from the beginning. There was no option for her to be straight–it just didn’t fit her. She’s a lot of things–emotional, a little punky, a little bit trouble but not the real kind, defiantly angry at society (aka a teenager), a talented artist, etc. Being gay is one of them, and while it informs her identity it isn’t her identity. But to make her straight? That wouldn’t be Caroline anymore.

Sometimes I get accused of being militant about things. I’m trying to write stories that are entertaining and engaging. Some people are gay. There’s no message or protest here, just the simple fact. Why are we trying to edit away facts?

 

Quandary

I have two projects underway now, both sadly suffering for my day job (and honestly, I took Sunday and Monday off–all work and no play and all that).

They are very different projects, editing one novel within an inch of its life and writing the first draft of another, much more carefully wrought novel. At least, I hope it is more carefully wrought. I do not want to do this level of editing a second time.

For Worse Things (the draft), I’ve been taking things very slow, limiting myself to a small word count with each sitting. I want to focus more on story progression and writing quality the FIRST time, so that when I go back through the story isn’t a hot mess. That has been going really well. I have about 15K now (need to update the word count widget). The book is fast paced and hopefully interesting. I’m struggling with each scene to make it the one I want, to deliver the story in a controlled way. I feel like I know my world, and my characters, and now it is a matter of unfolding all this information in the right order.

Waking Kiara is a lukewarm mess, and that’s after a major revision already. I can definitely see my progression as a writer from 2006 when I first wrote Kiara through to now. I hope in ten years I can say the same thing! I like the story, I LOVE the world, and I think I can fix her, but it is taking a lot of effort (and the awesome analog project board). On the plus side, she’s not a HOT mess anymore, just tepid. That’s doable.

But what is the quandary? I also have NaNoWriMo coming up fast! These two projects are super important to me, and I want to put my writerly energy into them whenever I can. At the same time, I am pretty committed to NaNo. It gets my mind jogged and my fingers typing, even in the worst of circumstances (my one losing year still gained me 20K, and that was on the heels of some MAJOR bad shit in my life).

So here is the question: what do I do? I’m tempted to work out the end of Worse Things, but if I keep my pace up I’ll be past the need for 50K by then. I have the option of sketching out a novel from Kiara’s world, centered around two of her sisters. I’m not sure what their story is yet, and I know that 50K won’t finish that story and I’d really like to FINISH SOMETHING. You know. Someday.

What do I do? I don’t know, but I’m hoping my ever patient and loving goddess Seshat might be holding the answer in her head and if I seduce her right, she’ll share with me.

(Unrelated: I had no trouble uploading gifs before, but all of a sudden gifs aren’t cooperating with WordPress. Wtf?)

 

Done!

Okay not really. But done getting the awesome analog board of awesomeness up and running. Let me tell you–this was a pretty good idea I had (with help from lots of tips online). I have a much better picture of the story’s faults now, and places I can cut/move/expand.

BEHOLD THE AWESOMENESS:

Okay well, maybe it doesn’t look all that awesome here, but I promise, it is awesome.

Also–please sign up for the NaNo Blogchain 2011! I’m just the humble host, but I think it is a great idea to have a clearinghouse of NaNo blogs. I’m hoping for a nice long list of folks so that when I need to procrastinate, I have a list of bloggers I can cheer on instead.

I need an idea for NaNo, pronto. One I can start and finish, because many of my NaNovels are sitting in unfinished states looking at me with frowny novel faces, and I can’t have that. I feel guilt.